So another year has gone by! I'd like to thank all my readers who have been so supportive to me these past three years. You really are the heart and soul of my inspiration. I love sharing my creations with you, and I love oogling your creations as well.

So here's to another good year, my lovelies. Happy New Year!
Dragon Age: Origins: OH MY FRIKKIN GAWD! What an
amazing fucking game!

I've been wanting this game ever since
Gameinformer did a spread on it back in 2008, and since it was released last month, my mom bought it for me for Christmas and OH MY FRIKKIN GAWD! It's one of the best games I've ever played. Not only is the storyline chosen/influenced by your decisions, the overall plot/subplots are so original and engaging that it makes writer's like me weep in happiness!
Dragon Age: Origins is made by Bioware; a company known for allowing romance subplots and sex scenes, and trust me, there is no shortage of them.

You can have sex with several different main characters; depending on your gender or if the character is bisexual. (Zevran and Lelianna *coughs*)
I played as a female Human Noble, so I dated the hetero Alistair. He's like every little girl's dream; an innocent, hilarious and adorably sweet knight. Since he's a Templar, he's religious, believes in justice, but above all.. IS A VIRGIN!

(Not for long though...

)
Zevran has to be my second favorite character. Since he's an Assassin, he's more dark-humored, playful and lusty. The best part is that he goes either way; your gender doesn't affect dating him. (Shame on him for checking out Wynne's "bosom", she's a grandmother!) He's easy to sleep with, unlike Alistair, but it's so hard to win his heart!

Say one wrong thing and you lose your chance to make him fall in love with you!
Review on Dragon Age: OriginsMusic: The soundtrack has simple instrumental/folk music, along with epic orchestral themes for battles and operatic singing throughout. Very beautiful. 10/10
Battle System: Can be a little confusing at first if you're new to real-time RPG. You can take control of any party member at any point during battle, and set up "Tactics" that the other computer-controlled characters will follow when not in your control. You can pause mid-battle to issue commands, and swiftly switch control of who's in charge. Battles can sometimes lag due to multiple enemies/spells on screen, but very rarely. 9/10
Plot: One of the best parts of this game is that even though it has an overall story that is amazing and original in itself, you have huge impact on what happens due to your decisions, however minor. Each chapter in the game leaves the fate of villages, cities, other characters, and pretty much the world in your hands. Some decisions can be difficult to make, and you're held responsible for the consequences. 10/10
Sidequests/Subplots: Depending on your character/actions, different sidequests may emerge that will benefit you. There are several sidequests in each city that can require hours of work to complete, but vary depending on the quest. "Romancing" characters is optional, but if you choose to, it can create subplots that can grant bonuses to the characters. Unlike other games, however, you must work to establish the relationship. You must give them gifts, make decisions they approve of, and have meaningful conversations with them on a regular basis. It takes time and effort, much like a real relationship. Depending on the character you are romancing, a point can be reached where you can become intimate. 10/10
Graphics: Released on PS3/360/PC, Dragon Age: Origins was designed mostly for the PC, so the graphics tend to lack for the PS3/360. The character models/armor designs look a little bland/flat and 2006-ish, which can be disappointing for some. 8/10
Character Origins/Customization: You can pick from different Origins such as: human noble, Magi (human/elf), Dalish elf, city elf, dwarf noble or dwarf commoner. These Origins highly reflect how the world see's and reacts to you. Warrior, Rogue, and Mage are the classes you can pick from. Warriors can take/dish out heavy damage, but are susceptible to magic. Rogues are more crafty, dealing damage with sneak attacks/critical backstabs, as well as being great archers. Mages are highly skilled in the Arcane/Healing arts, but have low health. There are several specializations dealing with each battle class, such as Berserker/Reaver/Templar/Champion for Warriors, Assassin/Duelist/Ranger/Bard for Rogues, and Arcane Warrior/Shapeshifter/Blood Mage/Spirit Healer for Mages. With a balance of characters in a party, they can be formidable. There is no shortage of complete customization and control of your created character. 10/10
Overall: 9.5/10
If you're into RPG's, this is one you cannot skip.

Thank you!

-equi
(Check out my Toby commission by
[link] and my new journal format!) ___________________________________
For those who are about to get started on my stories, here's brief descriptions and chapter archives:
SHORT STORIES:

CRIMSON FRAGMENTS

While being hunted by a predator with crimson-colored eyes, the psyche
Kallas must remain uncaptured by the
High Guardians and find a way to escape the twisted fate of being a
Deathspawn.
Genre: Action/Horror/Romance/Supernatural
Rated: 16+
Crimson Fragments - 1 - :
[link]
Crimson Fragments - 2 - Deathspawn: [link]
Crimson Fragments - 3 - : coming soon! 
EMERGENCE

These short stories are all based on a phenomenon called
Emergence. It is when two strangers connect with both their minds and bodies with a simple, unique act, instantly making them fall in love, no matter the odds.
Genre: Action/Adventure/Romance
Rated: 13+ 
The Arch (angels) and the Coven (vampires) are mortal enemies at war, but when an Arch soldier finds that his
soulmate is a forbidden Coven, how long can they live to love?
Emergence - Dylan & Darren:
[link]
If your family was brutally murdered, and you found that your
soulmate was the killer, would you be able to kill your
soulmate? Find out the decision
Synthesis must make.
Emergence - Absinthe & Synthesis:
[link]
In a world where men have outlawed women, soldiers known as the FER (Female Extraction Reconnassiance) hunt, arrest, and execute women under the law. But what happens when a FER soldier emerges with a woman destined for death? Can he save her from the laws of his world?
Emergence - Ginger & Blue (Part 1):
[link]Emergence - Ginger & Blue (Part 2):
[link] 

MARIONETTE: A DOLL'S CURSE

As a child whose soul has been taken from within her body and placed into a doll, Claire attempts to seek out
The Safe Zone, where she can be free of her maker; the
Phantasm known as
The Puppeteer.
This short story contains no spoilers to my novel Marionette. Genre: Action/Horror/Supernatural
Rated: 13+ 
A Doll's Curse - Chapter 1 - Escape:
[link]
A Doll's Curse - Chapter 2 - Nightmare:
[link]
A Doll's Curse - Chapter 3 - Broken:
[link]__END__
DEATHDEALERS

A young tyro-alchemist must find the cure for a plague that has stricken his village, sending himself to a demon world to find
God's Gifts. By travelling to Demeter, he must seek out the
Deathdealer known as
Tsuna; cat demon and son of Demeter's Demon Lord, who is the also the bodyguard of
Kaiol; a
Souleater of the Ninth Order, who holds the key to his treasure.
Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: 16+ Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
Deathdealers - Chapter 1:
[link]
Deathdealers - Chapter 2:
hiatus 

Deathdealers - Joke:
[link]NOVELS
PARIAH
Taking place during a medieval setting, humankind is falling weak against the races of intelligent Elves, savage Valkyries, and merciless Harpies. Each race, seeking to gain power over the other, has finally gained the upper hand on the humans, and the King is near powerless as the kingdom of Bedivere begins to fall. In a desperate attempt to save his kingdom, King Beowulf calls on a mysterious man, who he gives the name of Kendal, to seek out and find a sacred amulet known as The Sacrosanct. The amulet is rumored to possess the powers of a god, and would give the King the power he needs to keep his kingdom intact. While in pursuit to avenge a fallen friend, Kendal accepts the Kings request, knowing that the perilous hunt for the amulet might lead to his own death. The King has decided to give Kendal his own Pariah, a group of four self-sacrificing bodyguards, once prisoners who have been sentenced to death, that are to protect Kendal to the death. A bond grows between Kendal and each of his unique Pariah, which undoubtedly leads to trouble, and the many secrets behind Kendals true identity begins to unravel during this legendary last stand to save the kingdom of man. Genre: Action/Adventure/Fantasy/Shounen-ai
Rated: 14+ Graphic violence, brief language, brief sexuality, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Contains discussions of homosexuality, and rape.)
Pariah - Chapter 1 v.2:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 2 v.2:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 3:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 4:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 5:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 6:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 7:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 8:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part I:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 9 - Part II:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 10:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 11:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 12:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 13:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 14:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 15:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 16:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 17:
[link]

Pariah - Chapter 18:
[link]
Pariah - Chapter 19:
coming soon!
Character Profiles:

Pariah - Profile: Tobias:
[link]
Pariah - Profile: Vincent:
[link]
Pariah - Profile: Kendal:
[link]
Pariah - Profile: Roarke:
[link]
Pariah - Profile: Seth:
[link]Pariah Interviews, Quizzes, Add-ons, etc:
Vincent, the evil pyromaniac -
[link]
Tobias, the adorable bodyguard -
[link]
Vincent Character Quiz -
[link]
Pariah: Lonesome Hearts:
[link]
Pariah: Our Love Lullaby:
[link]PARIAH II:
Sorry, Pariah II will no longer be written.
Pariah II - Behind Blue Eyes:
[link]
His Journal - My Memories:
[link]Commissions, Fanart, etc:Tobias, commission by
: [link]Pariah cast, fanart by
: [link]Vincent, fanart by
: [link] and
[link]Seth, fanart by
: [link]Tobias&Kendal fanart by
: [link]Vincent, sketch by me
: [link]
ETERNAL
A complex tale about an arrogant and self-centered superior vampire by the name of Dorian. Fueled by the hatred he harbors for his own kind, Dorian works for a vampire extermination company called The Solution. There, he holds the high rank of Commander. While investigating a murder believed to have been committed by a vampire, Dorian and his children, Sebastian and Evette, are thrown right into the middle of the eternal battle between the Angels of Heaven and the Demons of Hell. Genre: Action/Adventure/Supernatural
Rated: 14+ for Graphic violence, brief language, brief nudity, and other mature subject matter.
Eternal - Chapter 1:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 2 v.2:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 3:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 4:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 5:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 6:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 7:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 8 & 9:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 10:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 11:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 12:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 13:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 14:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 15:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 16:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 17:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 18:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 19 - Part I:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 19 - Part II:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 20:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 21:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 22:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 23:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 24:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 25:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 26:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 27:
[link]
Eternal - Chapter 28:
[link]
Eternal - Ending:
[link]____END____Warning: Eternal spoilers.
The Arbinger Family Tree<:
[link] This is a chapter from Eternal's prequel about Dorian's mother and father adventure to eliminate the Empire.
Amaya's Story - Awaiting Dawn:
[link] Commissions, fanart, etc:Dorian, commission by
: [link]Dorian, sketch by me
: [link]
MARIONETTE
I will have an introductory for it soon.Genre: Action/Horror/Romance/Supernatural
Rated: 13+ for Violence, language, and mature subject matter.
Marionette - Prologue:
[link]
Marionette - Chapter 1 - The Escape:
[link]
Marionette - Chapter 2 - Welcome Home:
[link]
Marionette - Chapter 3 - Nightmare:
[link]
Marionette - Chapter 4 - Nice To Meet You Too?:
[link] 
Marionette - Chapter 5 - The Enforcer:
[link]
Marionette - Chapter 6 - True Selves:
[link] 

Marionette - Chapter 7 -
hiatus
Marionette Character Sets:
Claire Dumont, the Marionette:
[link]
Matthew Dillinger, the Ventriloquist:
[link]
Devon Canfield, the Enforcer:
[link]
Clyde Davenport, the Vampire:
coming soon! 
Reilly, the Shapeshifter:
[link]
ARCHAIC
I haven't had time to write a proper introduction to this story, but I will update with one soon.
This story is basically about a group of teenage students who have been drafted into a military institute called the Archay Academy. It trains it's students to be Arcadian pilots and be shipped off to war after they graduate four years. It mainly follows Milo, a humble orphan who seeks revenge on a rival kingdom after his hometown is destroyed by an enemy tactical invasion. Although the Archay Academy is praised for dishing out the best pilots, having high-ranking trainers, scientists, and doctors, the Archay is not all it seems as Milo begins to unravel deadly secrets behind the much feared, mechanical Requiems. Genre: Action/Adventure/Mecha/Supernatural
Rated: 13+ for Violence, brief language, and other mature subject matter.
Archaic - Chapter 1: Introduction:
[link]
Archaic - Chapter 2: Homeroom:
[link]
Archaic - Chapter 3: A Transitioned:
[link]
Archaic - Chapter 4: The Bad Seed:
[link]
Archaic - Chapter 5: 3-11:
[link]Character Profiles:

Archaic - Profile: Milo:
[link]
Archaic - Profile: Ollie:
[link]
Archaic - Profile: Mitch:
[link]
THE DEVIL'S HARBINGER
WARNING:This is the continuation of the
Eternal series. Do not read if you wish to read
Eternal. There are major spoilers, as it is it's continuation, and would severely impact the surprise and entertainment of the
Eternal storyline.
"Angels and Demons exist... They walk amongst you, influencing your ideas and thoughts, and it's up to you, as a human, to decide which route you take. There is a balance that must be kept, to keep the cycle of the Afterlife moving, to keep the lifestream in motion. But what if one man had the power... to alter the cycles? To change the fate of the world, of each human, of each soul... What if this man, this deity, was so powerful, no Demon, nor Angel, could harness him, muzzle him, or keep him bound and chained?
They can try...I dare them. Because I am this man.
My name is Denzel, and I am god of the Dying World." Genre: Action/Adventure/Supernatural
Rated: 16+ for Graphic violence, brief language, brief nudity, and other mature subject matter.
(Warning: Mature material.)
The Devil's Harbinger - 1:
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - 2:
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - 3:
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - Intro (Eternal spoilers):
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - 4:
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - 5:
[link]
The Devil's Harbinger - 6:
hiatus
ENIGMA This is a prequel to Eternal, on the lives of Simone's parents. Not rated. Chapter Archive:Enigma - Prologue -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 1 -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 2 -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 3 -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 4 -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 5 -
[link]Enigma - Chapter 6:
[link]Enigma - Chapter 7:
[link]Enigma - Chapter 8:
[link]Enigma - Chapter 9:
[link]Enigma - Chapter 10:
hiatus 
THE PROGENY
A story about three brothers who must make amends for their past lives by protecting an angel for eternity. I WILL SOMEDAY WRITE THIS STORY, I PROMISE! I HAVE NOT FORGOTTEN YOU! Not rated. 
The Progeny - Chapter 1:
[link]Other:
The Progeny - Character Bio's:
[link]
The Progeny - OC Quiz - Noah:
[link]STAND ALONE PIECES:
When evil prevails. Darkwatch -
[link]Fanfic from the game Drakengard.Drakengard: Seals of Fate:
[link]
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We're currently proposing a couple Bioware Fan Projects that we would love to have every fan contribute to. Checkout the latest blog entry on the Group page to read more about it. Whether it's ideas or art, we welcome your input!
So thanks for making our club even more awesome by joining, and I hope to hear from you soon.
Cheers,
Inverse
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Clubbies: #BiowareFanClub #Way-of-the-Open-Palm #sw-KotOR ~Rydia-x-Edge-club
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Can't wait to see some more of your stories, they have chapters, how interasting, and the character sets too!!
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FallMoonlitRose
And thank you.
And really? Wow thanks!!
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FallMoonlitRose
It's okay, I guess I'm a little creeper. >.>
I know how that is! I was so afraid to start posting my writing, and I ended up getting one very hurtful comment, but you know what? I got 7 good comments, and it totally washed away that one bad one.
And I still have trouble posting! I had to make a seperate/anonymous account to post up my first short story with a sex scene, but I got the nerve to post it here after it got alot of views and comments.
So I guess, to sum it up: DO IT. :joy:
Haha, not at all, I actually don't feel like my work is worth being admired, so people like you make me feel a bit better.
What? What did they say? D:
Sex scene huh? Haha. I think what gets me here is the fact theres a download buttion, I hate that. So mostly here I put up half a story, and to read the whole thing you need to have me added on my LiveJournal (although I do have a few full stories up on here).
What do you tend to write usually?
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FallMoonlitRose
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